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Life Sucks
No pleasure in life
starring in horror filled eyes
danger waits
in every dark corner
in every quiet place
halfway between sleep and awarness
i sigh and close my eyes
my mind having usual nightmares
a place were i tumble
drifting thoughts refuse
to let go and let me sleep!
starring in horror filled eyes
danger waits
in every dark corner
in every quiet place
halfway between sleep and awarness
i sigh and close my eyes
my mind having usual nightmares
a place were i tumble
drifting thoughts refuse
to let go and let me sleep!
Published 2nd Oct 2012
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2nd Oct 2012 4:57am
Love the poem you are on the road to greatness dark is the night and in death we fight keep creating poems you have very good points within the poem.
2nd Oct 2012 5:32am
2nd Oct 2012 6:28am
I liked this poem, I have been in that state many times in my life... nicely done
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