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Cutie Across The Bar

Hi, Hey, Hello,

How should I approach?

Excuse me, do I know you?

Of course not, think fool

Walk by and spill my drink

She wouldn't like that, would she

Smile, wave tap the seat beside me

Buy her a drink approach casually

Ask her to dance, offer my hand

Like a million guys already haven't

What should I do, what should I do?

Compliment, fake accent, lie about my job

Get on stage and sing her a song

When she doesn't even know me at all

She's way out of my league

I can't even move, how could I speak?

Lost in the awe of her ever growing beauty

I caught her glancing back to me

Her smile alone was tempting

Twirling gum around her finger

As she began to make her way nearer

I tapped the bar table for two beers

She pulled out a pack of cigarettes

Lit one and offered me another

Came in close and lit mine with hers

Passed her a beer, exchanging first words

Name for name as she sat next to me

The rest well ... what do you think?
Written by OctoberArts (Octob3r)
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