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Pedro, the Ambivalent Domicile
One day, Pedro was just sitting there. He was just sitting there because he's a fucking house and that's all that houses can fucking do. Nevertheless, Pedro didn't mind. He didn't have an opinion on his lack of mobility because he's a fucking house and houses don't have any fucking opinions on anything.
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Published 8th May 2010
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8th May 2010 5:54am
8th May 2010 8:23am
it is poetry, but poetry done before, questioning language properties, of fucking objects, etc
8th May 2010 3:04pm
I meant to post this in Prose but was in a rush to get off the computer. So I moved it to Prose. Thanks for the look out and the comments. Glad you enjoyed it.
8th May 2010 4:12pm
I like a lot how this shifts from being very mannerly and reserved, to suddenly being loud and unrestrained. It works well, especially with this interjection of: 'Nevertheless, Pedro didn't mind.' That made me smile.
9th May 2010 00:00am
Thanks for the comments.
DMON - I moved it to Prose. It fits more there, I think.
vuxus_tuxsusa - actually its part of a book I wrote (I'm shopping around) in which I write things that sound like children's stories but they're really adult or offensive.
Merda - Thanks a lot! I have to say all my comics are rant comics with the exception of Mitch Hedberg.
DMON - I moved it to Prose. It fits more there, I think.
vuxus_tuxsusa - actually its part of a book I wrote (I'm shopping around) in which I write things that sound like children's stories but they're really adult or offensive.
Merda - Thanks a lot! I have to say all my comics are rant comics with the exception of Mitch Hedberg.
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- Edited 14th May 2018 11:51pm
9th May 2010 7:25am
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