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Rainbow of Death
Red for the blood spilling from your wrists
Orange for the cation sign you missed
Yellow for the bruises you left
Green for the embalming fluid once your dead
Blue for the veins empty and hallow
Purple for your clawing finger tips
Pink for deadly blushing cheeks
The Rainbow of death
From pink to red
The colors of the end
Ones to knock you to your knees
Weather one or all colors you receive
By the end there is no you and me...
Orange for the cation sign you missed
Yellow for the bruises you left
Green for the embalming fluid once your dead
Blue for the veins empty and hallow
Purple for your clawing finger tips
Pink for deadly blushing cheeks
The Rainbow of death
From pink to red
The colors of the end
Ones to knock you to your knees
Weather one or all colors you receive
By the end there is no you and me...
Published 27th Sep 2012
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28th Sep 2012 10:30pm
28th Sep 2012 10:33pm
4th Oct 2012 4:00pm
I think the last line is redundant, given what proceeds it. You don't need it. Besides a capital not needed ("rainbow")and one word misspelled ("whether"), you display serious and consistent metaphors. A fine poem. Thank you.
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