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My Fingers on Your Skin
Underneath a blanket
our hands a busy hive,
I touched your body freely
and made it feel alive.
From stems all smooth
and muscled
to hips and lips
and thighs,
no need for light
when finger tips
work way
more deep
than eyes.
To touch the depth
of humanness
and open every door
is just the start
of where I'd go
much more
I know
if I with you
could freely
open bore.
To hold and taste
and incubate
a subtle feeling groove
would more than make
my mind grow straight
when sleeve fits glove
in tube.
But more than simply
being in
your sanctum
debonair,
to be with you
inside your head
a bed of being fair.
A touch
of hands and lips
and my homunculus
would deeply love
that simple touch
of simply being us.
runningturtle87
our hands a busy hive,
I touched your body freely
and made it feel alive.
From stems all smooth
and muscled
to hips and lips
and thighs,
no need for light
when finger tips
work way
more deep
than eyes.
To touch the depth
of humanness
and open every door
is just the start
of where I'd go
much more
I know
if I with you
could freely
open bore.
To hold and taste
and incubate
a subtle feeling groove
would more than make
my mind grow straight
when sleeve fits glove
in tube.
But more than simply
being in
your sanctum
debonair,
to be with you
inside your head
a bed of being fair.
A touch
of hands and lips
and my homunculus
would deeply love
that simple touch
of simply being us.
runningturtle87
Published 21st Sep 2012
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21st Sep 2012 11:24am
21st Sep 2012 1:31pm
Carnality is the thought that our deeds can make us whole....one that has been abused by the religious...a very interesting study....and so on every level, yes, touch and sensuality go way beyond that....Grace.
21st Sep 2012 2:07pm
Carnality yes pure lust they call sinful, but love and its sensuousness goes beyond, and there, there will only be the offerings and the acceptance. I believe in that .. a union of souls perhaps, in the joining of two into one. Eve to Adam, be a rib again...
21st Sep 2012 2:44pm
Very nice image...you did that well.....Lust of the flesh and carnality are the same thing...the desire to be righteous through one's actions of following the Law, and this is a very odd inversion done by the church to insure that sexuality was seen as the culprit and not ritual and ceremony.. Isaiah clears this up in Chapter one...no more performances...only being real, no pretensions, only being intimate...but the church would not have it...and so sexuality became the scapegoat. And yet, more church members persisted..how? If abstinence was the key, why did they not die off? Lies kept them going! But here, you have the key...that rib, the love of self to have what completes it....ah......real love and the need to have it.....this is the lust for life, Grace.
22nd Sep 2012 10:01am
21st Sep 2012 2:53pm
Whoa! Smokin hot and extremely sensual very nice RT, you struck an exquisite balance between sexy and sensual well done!
Red
Red
21st Sep 2012 3:21pm
I was not aware that steak was on the menu..smokin hot, well done...you are hungry!