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I Didn't want you to go
I'd love to say I left you standing by your car with last nights kiss
let go of your hand when I turned to walk away
I didn't
took you into my dreams
made love to you two times
We talked for hours about nothing
but it meant something
you wiped my tears as I opened up my heart to you
made me feel alive
gave me hope that love is real and out there
maybe I can be happy with someone other then myself.
And then
just like that
I let go of your hand!
let go of your hand when I turned to walk away
I didn't
took you into my dreams
made love to you two times
We talked for hours about nothing
but it meant something
you wiped my tears as I opened up my heart to you
made me feel alive
gave me hope that love is real and out there
maybe I can be happy with someone other then myself.
And then
just like that
I let go of your hand!
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Re: I Didn't want you to go
18th Sep 2012 00:37am
took you into my dreams
made love to you two times
We talked for hours about nothing
but it meant something
Great write sweetheart... Dont let go baby!!
made love to you two times
We talked for hours about nothing
but it meant something
Great write sweetheart... Dont let go baby!!
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18th Sep 2012 00:38am
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18th Sep 2012 5:44am
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18th Sep 2012 5:50am
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18th Sep 2012 12:35pm
Re: I Didn't want you to go
18th Sep 2012 11:46am
Gi, if you keep writing like this you aren't going to be able to say anymore that you aren't a writer.
This is really really good!!!
Breathtaking!
This is really really good!!!
Breathtaking!
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re: Re: I Didn't want you to go
18th Sep 2012 12:36pm
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19th Sep 2012 4:48am
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Re: I Didn't want you to go
26th Sep 2012 8:26am
Love will find you eventually. I just wish that I could see any hope left in this world to believe that, but for you, my friend, I want you to find that. Touching read. We all make sacrifices, sometimes for completely unknown reasons.
xoxo
xoxo
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26th Sep 2012 3:13pm