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Be yourself
who are you
do you even know
the bruises the scars?
are you going to let that define your life?
is that who you wanna be
it's ok not to be you
hide behind a fake smile
live in a fantasy
it's just easier
but in the end you will always just
"be yourself"
do you even know
the bruises the scars?
are you going to let that define your life?
is that who you wanna be
it's ok not to be you
hide behind a fake smile
live in a fantasy
it's just easier
but in the end you will always just
"be yourself"
Published 13th Sep 2012
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Anonymous
- Edited 5th Aug 2019 1:43am
13th Sep 2012 6:28pm
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13th Sep 2012 6:29pm
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 5:40pm
13th Sep 2012 7:16pm
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13th Sep 2012 7:42pm
Hmmm I'm liking the question mark. And I'm having a hard time with putting the words where I want them on my phone. It looks one way! Then when I hit submit its not how I want it. But thanks for the help :*)
13th Sep 2012 9:47pm
13th Sep 2012 10:01pm
13th Sep 2012 11:48pm
always be yourself, but don't convince yourself that being you is being a victim.
Love the positive vibe coming through in this piece, heavy subject given a light and well written touch.
Thanks for the read.
Love the positive vibe coming through in this piece, heavy subject given a light and well written touch.
Thanks for the read.
13th Sep 2012 11:50pm
14th Sep 2012 1:08am
I love the poem, but I also like how you were given constructive criticism without bashing your work.
This piece should be posted everywhere, because the message is clear.
Way to go!!!!!
This piece should be posted everywhere, because the message is clear.
Way to go!!!!!
14th Sep 2012 1:12am
14th Sep 2012 3:58am
I really like this poem. Such a power message in few words. Regardless of what you try, you can only really be yourself. well done.
14th Sep 2012 4:00am
14th Sep 2012 5:00am
This is great with a great message. I love your structure. I try things like that sometimes and always just end up backspacing all the lines back to the front. Clearly it works here though. Great job!
14th Sep 2012 5:03am
14th Sep 2012 1:14pm
14th Sep 2012 1:45pm
Anonymous
- Edited 21st May 2018 7:36pm
14th Sep 2012 11:43pm
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14th Sep 2012 11:50pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
15th Sep 2012 7:00am
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15th Sep 2012 7:18am
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
17th Sep 2012 6:48pm
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17th Sep 2012 6:52pm
Don't let it get you. Stand strong! Hope you feel better! Don't let anyone make you feel like you're not worthy of being yourself! Trust me you're xooxox