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wicked wordsmith
sweet poetic whisper
seems thats all it took
intrigued by your vibes
like a fish on the line im hooked
sensually massage my mental
rub me the right way
pique my curiosity
with your verbal foreplay
wicked wordsmith hypnotize me
entrance me with vivid explicits
it seems you're on my level
as we teasingly match wits
never vulgar, always charming
your tongue is very clever
and when it comes to "shuttin" me up
Nobody Does It Better
seems thats all it took
intrigued by your vibes
like a fish on the line im hooked
sensually massage my mental
rub me the right way
pique my curiosity
with your verbal foreplay
wicked wordsmith hypnotize me
entrance me with vivid explicits
it seems you're on my level
as we teasingly match wits
never vulgar, always charming
your tongue is very clever
and when it comes to "shuttin" me up
Nobody Does It Better
Published 28th Apr 2010
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5th May 2010 00:16am
19th Jan 2013 4:55pm
sweet poetic whisper
seems thats all it took
intrigued by your vibes
like a fish on the line im hooked
Now my feet didn't expect to quiver!
Complete to protect and set for just in case... but what shivers barricades...
Reams of scat from books...
Run out like leagues of water in tides.
Some wishes perk feelings to brook, instead of revealings. This one shook!
sensually massage my mental
rub me the right way
pique my curiosity
with your verbal foreplay
Hence a collage incidental
At the hub spinning tight like sunrays
Speaking of oddities...
Hurdling faster...
like a sloop swerving to avoid disaster...
Slowing rays into particles past Jupiter...
And back to stay into sunrays, as alluded earlier. To hurdle some more today.
This flow is how I show what I adore, by the way. Your work is amazing to me.
wicked wordsmith hypnotize me
entrance me with vivid explicits
What clicks and whirls on this stand?
A stick to twirl the sand?
Quick to unfurl and before it lands.
Muddy rocks in a blur.
Why did I bother?
To expose life just under water.
In an instant to murky this...
Worlds just a few inches under the surface
Blink and hurl and curse at this!
Okaaaaay.... let the stick loose! No need to abuse the marine life Miz!
But like blooming bursts in wildfields dispsersed, universes spring first
Creations wings a verse to advance with vivid explicits
And what's exhibited is dishevelled
It pours out, overfits, bolder will, overspills and what's more gets deviled!
Omniverses unliminited like the pebbles on a beach infinite...
But each pinpoint shining vast like glass bevelled. Tight and magic like light refracted it's just the right track to split.
it seems you're on my level
as we teasingly match wits
Please, Ms. PoeticDesire ... this was one cool joint. For a jeweled point I'd be happy for whole MAPS of this!
never vulgar, always charming
your tongue is very clever
and when it comes to "shuttin" me up
Nobody Does It Better
30th Jan 2013 6:59am
9th Feb 2013 5:17am
Your praise for a composed comment is acknowledged and held close to heart, but still... please... rather than speechLESS, I would crave for speech FURTHER. I would behooved to move whole maps of your work to match, please, Ms. poeticDesire.