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Roses Are Red
Roses are Red,
Violets are Blue
Bullshit
even the oldest cliche is untrue
Violets are fuckin Violet
maybe thats why
peeps are so violent
cause of all the lies
from birth
smashed on through
Published 7th Sep 2012
| Edited 8th Sep 2012
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7th Sep 2012 1:19am
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7th Sep 2012 1:22am
7th Sep 2012 1:24am
ok -- this is probably do-able cause
I can pronounce this stuff. LOL
I usually cant get through the dense syntax
on my usual wordy bullshit.
I can pronounce this stuff. LOL
I usually cant get through the dense syntax
on my usual wordy bullshit.
7th Sep 2012 2:36am
7th Sep 2012 2:41am
I believe in Romance as You do Grace : > )
....but .... Violets still aint blue !
11th Sep 2012 1:23am
One see colours of the rainbow on drizzles. One see rose tinted yesteryears: if the poet says the violet is blue, who is to say thats not true: You and I dont see that, its just violet, of course, but who is to say we are both wrong or right. Its perspective...poets are complicated.
7th Sep 2012 3:17pm
Ha! That's kind of funny.
Not feeling the word "imbued" at the end, that's just me though.
Peace!
Not feeling the word "imbued" at the end, that's just me though.
Peace!
You are ABSOLUTELY right R/O.
I quickly one-offed this ---
but I completely agree:
the word at the end has to be "blue collar" --
not so fancy --- thanks for the honesty : > )
Im goin with
"smashed through" for now R/O......
I quickly one-offed this ---
but I completely agree:
the word at the end has to be "blue collar" --
not so fancy --- thanks for the honesty : > )
Im goin with
"smashed through" for now R/O......
10th Sep 2012 8:51am
