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As I Lay
As I lay
Laying on my bed as I stare at the ceiling at a time were your trying to close your eyes and rest but your mind just can not relax and let go, you cross my mind. I get flash backs of things that had just taken place and it puts a satisfied smile on my face. Just for a second I try to think of other things to occupy my thoughts from being consumed with sensual thoughts of endless encounters of stolen moments we’ve shared together but I can’t help my self and I’m all a sudden over flowed with vivid thoughts of how your lips touched my skin and your gratifying caress. As I lay here on these golden satin sheets my mind stained with the image of you and I laying next to each other lost in pure bliss. I am now helpless in a delightful daze, my mind stays lost in a day dream with thoughts of your touch.
Bethany S.
Laying on my bed as I stare at the ceiling at a time were your trying to close your eyes and rest but your mind just can not relax and let go, you cross my mind. I get flash backs of things that had just taken place and it puts a satisfied smile on my face. Just for a second I try to think of other things to occupy my thoughts from being consumed with sensual thoughts of endless encounters of stolen moments we’ve shared together but I can’t help my self and I’m all a sudden over flowed with vivid thoughts of how your lips touched my skin and your gratifying caress. As I lay here on these golden satin sheets my mind stained with the image of you and I laying next to each other lost in pure bliss. I am now helpless in a delightful daze, my mind stays lost in a day dream with thoughts of your touch.
Bethany S.
Published 3rd Sep 2012
| Edited 28th Sep 2012
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
24th Sep 2012 11:25pm
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27th Sep 2012 5:14pm
Vivid word picture! I might make one change; "things that had just took place". Make it "things
that had just taken place" or "things that had just occurred."
that had just taken place" or "things that had just occurred."
27th Sep 2012 10:07pm
28th Sep 2012 9:04am
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28th Sep 2012 7:19pm
The flow is unbeatable - like a little stream of soft reflections, mingling like in a strange sweet melody...
28th Sep 2012 7:30pm
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
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