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A Girl Said to the Universe
A girl said to the universe:
" i dont know my purpose in such a man's world ,sir!"
" Astronomy will get the best of you, " replied the Universe.
The girl looks unto the sky. "What?"
The Universe says: " There's a star in your womb"
Published 30th Aug 2012
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30th Aug 2012 10:50pm
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31st Aug 2012 1:57am
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31st Aug 2012 3:39am
The metaphor means that any girl can have her own destiny . By looking up she can always get up and the star in your womb means that her destiny lies deep within her
31st Aug 2012 3:00am
31st Aug 2012 3:35am
a profound and cleverly penned piece...i love it! i see you are new here, too so i want to welcome you also and thank you for checking out my poem...Faith
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2nd Sep 2012 3:56pm
Thank you in return. My write of Ghosts continues slowly with perhaps another 4 or 5 parts to follow. All the best with your own writing.
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