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Longing For Something Unknown
The endless hunger begins to consume
Longing for the sensation all have spoken of, but rarely felt
But the question is from whom
Who will satisfy my ever- growing hunger?
The eternal thirst overwhelms
Yearning for a sip of the delectable unknown
But the question is where I will find it amid these realms
Who will quench my everlasting thirst?
Countless will be affected
Innocent hearts will be torn and glistening tears will be shed
But all will be forgotten
These results, will they ever cease?
Will I ever reach satisfaction?
Will my heart ever beat for what is right?
Out, will this forsaken curse ever be driven?
This knowledge, I lack, but utterly long for
This is basically a rewrite of "A Vampyre's Enquiries." I started out wanting to write something like this, but ended up with my first version instead. After receiving a comment that shared my exact thoughts I decided I needed a rewrite, so here it is.
Published 18th Aug 2012
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18th Aug 2012 6:33am
This is even better than the first version. But shouldn't you be working on the woodchuck poem? LOL!!! I will edit that part after you read it, I just couldn't resist. But this is really an excellent poem and I can relate to it even more now! jj
JJ, I work on several poems at a time... some are quickly written... others take time. I will work on the woodchuck poem. Honest. I have been, actually.
Thank you for liking it and adding it to your reading list along with my first version. I love that you like my poems and consider them worth reading list material!
I am sure many can relate to this, though its saddening how we all long for something that seems to never come.
Dont edit! Leave it how it is!
Thank you for liking it and adding it to your reading list along with my first version. I love that you like my poems and consider them worth reading list material!
I am sure many can relate to this, though its saddening how we all long for something that seems to never come.
Dont edit! Leave it how it is!
4th Sep 2012 4:40pm
I know exactly what you mean babe. Just keep waiting, it will come soon enough
4th Sep 2012 9:22pm
Babe! I'm glad you got online and read this. Obviously, you know exactly what I was referring to. Yes, it will come soon, but you got to have patience. Something I struggle with, as you know.