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Solid iron primitive steel
before they got to you
so refined
you
your face
you using it as a brush, a pencil
a stuttering picture
a movie manipulated freeze frame
solid iron
never a thought of fragile
before you broke
or me or it or they
NOT fragile
you
you standing there
NEVER fragile
just a few moments before this
a solid iron primitive steel
before they got to you
so refined there
you
your face
you using it as a brush, a pencil
a pen, a stylus of moos manic
but never you
never you as freeze frames
as manipulated frames
slow motion solid iron
never a thought of fragile
before you broke
before it broke
breakable
before i broke
me not YOU
iron primitive steel
just you
just a few
just a few moments before this
NOT fragile
solid iron before they got to you
so refined
standing
standing there
you
your face
you using it as a brush
a brush painting: < a wonderful life >.
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before they got to you
so refined
you
your face
you using it as a brush, a pencil
a stuttering picture
a movie manipulated freeze frame
solid iron
never a thought of fragile
before you broke
or me or it or they
NOT fragile
you
you standing there
NEVER fragile
just a few moments before this
a solid iron primitive steel
before they got to you
so refined there
you
your face
you using it as a brush, a pencil
a pen, a stylus of moos manic
but never you
never you as freeze frames
as manipulated frames
slow motion solid iron
never a thought of fragile
before you broke
before it broke
breakable
before i broke
me not YOU
iron primitive steel
just you
just a few
just a few moments before this
NOT fragile
solid iron before they got to you
so refined
standing
standing there
you
your face
you using it as a brush
a brush painting: < a wonderful life >.
- - -
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Published 4th Aug 2012
| Edited 28th Dec 2013
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4th Aug 2012 12:58pm
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
4th Aug 2012 2:19pm
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4th Aug 2012 4:29pm
Incredible, you had me reading both directions at the same time....really stable and solid. Very powerful. There is a point where things can get muddy if the form over saturates, but you pulled up at exactly the right moment. Terse and complete.
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Nov 2022 2:35am
4th Aug 2012 5:56pm
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5th Aug 2012 5:49am
wonderful life'like rapidfire theme[of]variations,
like automatic
weapons
spitting they's cold'metal death
in this gunLovin great
Nation where every realMan outta have
a steely death'phallus t'keep his cock straight...
like automatic
weapons
spitting they's cold'metal death
in this gunLovin great
Nation where every realMan outta have
a steely death'phallus t'keep his cock straight...
5th Aug 2012 8:12am
5th Aug 2012 1:29pm
goodgracious!
waddle thee naybors say?
---
&like aye belong't' the
Delta of Venus----yknow, 'taken' (tho ethereally)
butt
eye'preciate thee senti'ment of It All---
waddle thee naybors say?
---
&like aye belong't' the
Delta of Venus----yknow, 'taken' (tho ethereally)
butt
eye'preciate thee senti'ment of It All---
"No man ever tastes of the same delta twice; for it's never the same delta and it's never the same man."
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