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Blindfolded Art
"Remember it all, every insult, every tear. Tattoo it on the inside of your mind. In life, knowledge of poisons is essential. I've told you, nobody becomes an artist unless they have to.”
buckets of cyanide spew from behind your teeth
impregnating my mind with pearlescent paints
I draw the everlasting poison up through my pen
and etch your onyx colored lies over my grey walls
I scribble the painful scars onto my cortex
frantically working nonstop on the new graffiti
slashing below the surface entering the bloodstream
while garnet stained flesh drips like melted icicles
I plead for a break from your endless venom
you oblige me and I strip away my blindfold
astonished by the masterpiece I have composed
I self-destruct to make you my permanent muse
entered into a competition
buckets of cyanide spew from behind your teeth
impregnating my mind with pearlescent paints
I draw the everlasting poison up through my pen
and etch your onyx colored lies over my grey walls
I scribble the painful scars onto my cortex
frantically working nonstop on the new graffiti
slashing below the surface entering the bloodstream
while garnet stained flesh drips like melted icicles
I plead for a break from your endless venom
you oblige me and I strip away my blindfold
astonished by the masterpiece I have composed
I self-destruct to make you my permanent muse
entered into a competition
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Re: Blindfolded Art
1st Aug 2012 1:52pm
DAMN. You step out of the herd again with this piece. I'm not an apt critiquer. I like much your extensive vocabulary.
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1st Aug 2012 7:38pm
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1st Aug 2012 2:48pm
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1st Aug 2012 2:58pm
Rachel this would have been good in poetry and art collide, what ever comp its in its got my vote it very good. Good luck to you.
Red
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re: Re: Blindfolded Art
1st Aug 2012 7:40pm
Thank you very much Miss Red. I truly appreciate your kind words. So glad you stopped by. :)
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1st Aug 2012 3:47pm
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1st Aug 2012 7:42pm
Re: Blindfolded Art
1st Aug 2012 5:59pm
Very well written, great use of words, and I love your skill with imagery.
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1st Aug 2012 7:42pm
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2nd Aug 2012 3:33am
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