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Stiletto's
her silver strappy stiletto's are her favorite
though they remind her of him
and how they sauntered the city sidewalks
with basket woven fingers and the stroke of his thumb
the cadence echos softly with every stride
as she still hears the rhythm of their laughter
memories of his arm cloaked across her shoulders
like a morning fog claiming the land before dawn
she slides the sandals off her arches
never forgetting the tides inside her core
when he explored her skin with his lips
and kissed each leg, as he removed her heels
she flawlessly wears her treasured stories
years will change the importance of them
fading and broken straps will alter their integrity
but never will she throw away her memories of him
though they remind her of him
and how they sauntered the city sidewalks
with basket woven fingers and the stroke of his thumb
the cadence echos softly with every stride
as she still hears the rhythm of their laughter
memories of his arm cloaked across her shoulders
like a morning fog claiming the land before dawn
she slides the sandals off her arches
never forgetting the tides inside her core
when he explored her skin with his lips
and kissed each leg, as he removed her heels
she flawlessly wears her treasured stories
years will change the importance of them
fading and broken straps will alter their integrity
but never will she throw away her memories of him
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28th Jul 2012 10:24pm
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re: Stiletto's
29th Jul 2012 3:45am
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Oh man...you speak with words of memories relived...you pull with unyielding force until I am sitting dead center in the middle of this story you weave...gorgeous as always. You continue to prove yourself as one of the greatest writers to grace this site with your beauty of mind and skillful pen. Well done ;)
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29th Jul 2012 3:47am
Ah, TTR, you are always too kind with your words. I really appreciate you.
Thanks for stopping by :)
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Thanks for stopping by :)
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29th Jul 2012 3:49am
Ahh, Jesta. You are on my top five, so I really adore your words. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. I truly appreciate it.
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29th Jul 2012 7:50pm
Thank you Christian!
Yes, I know your favorite part. :)
Thanks so much for your kind words.
XxXx
Yes, I know your favorite part. :)
Thanks so much for your kind words.
XxXx
Re: Stiletto's
29th Jul 2012 7:00pm
A pair of heels that unleash the girl inside. Those sultry, silver seductions should be creating living memories eons from now even as she sashays holding onto a walker. :)
I love this piece.
I love this piece.
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29th Jul 2012 7:53pm
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29th Jul 2012 9:42pm
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29th Jul 2012 10:19pm
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30th Jul 2012 00:46am
Well after a comments section like this, there is not much I can say, Brilliant write.
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30th Jul 2012 1:06am
Brilliant is a very kind thing to say. I am so glad that you stopped by Levi. Much appreciated.
XxXx
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26th Aug 2012 10:34pm
I am grateful that you shared with me what emotions the poem evokes in you. I always hope to make the reader feel something with my poems.
I am so glad you stopped by and graced my page with your words.
Thank you.
~X~
I am so glad you stopped by and graced my page with your words.
Thank you.
~X~
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12th Aug 2013 5:18pm
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