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croissant
we let it thread to veil
where light avow
those trivial crossing
stacks and layers
to chunked accumulation
walling between us
moulds to the shape
of partial-eclispe
two ends sees eye to eye
baking in friction
from the ignition
our erratic medley ignites
to crisp golden
alluring warm glow
fragility in a bite
where light avow
those trivial crossing
stacks and layers
to chunked accumulation
walling between us
moulds to the shape
of partial-eclispe
two ends sees eye to eye
baking in friction
from the ignition
our erratic medley ignites
to crisp golden
alluring warm glow
fragility in a bite
Published 25th Jul 2012
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25th Jul 2012 5:27pm
26th Jul 2012 5:35pm
26th Jul 2012 1:33am
Just reading this makes me hungry. I was curious as to what it was that 'we' let thread. I find the first two stanzas fairly ambiguous and I think the addition of a stanza it the beginning giving a bit more of a hint as to what 'it' is, might kindle more of an interest in the rest of the poem.
27th Jul 2012 7:29am