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Geologic
feeling like
Banded iron ore
layers
upon
layers
of
sediment
filling my soul
walking and talking
yet i feel
like a mafic mineral
dark
almost
dead
decaying
weathering
fighting tears
viscosity
I'm a vector
a mathematical element
without a fixed position
force
gravity
the time scale
eras
periods
epochs
the ancestral curse
from which i can not free myself
a regolith of pain
blankets
me
Banded iron ore
layers
upon
layers
of
sediment
filling my soul
walking and talking
yet i feel
like a mafic mineral
dark
almost
dead
decaying
weathering
fighting tears
viscosity
I'm a vector
a mathematical element
without a fixed position
force
gravity
the time scale
eras
periods
epochs
the ancestral curse
from which i can not free myself
a regolith of pain
blankets
me
Published 19th Jul 2012
| Edited 25th Jul 2012
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19th Jul 2012 6:49pm
19th Jul 2012 6:51pm
19th Jul 2012 8:51pm
...hold on there....lemme look up
"mafic" and "regolith" and I`ll tell ya
what I think............
"mafic" and "regolith" and I`ll tell ya
what I think............
19th Jul 2012 8:55pm
Yo , I`m down with "Regolith"
but "mafic" sounds kinda "Rockist" to me...
not quite "Periodotically Correct".........
......but since You are completely covered under the 5th Sediment,
I suppose, yeah --- I dig it : > )
You`ve got a quite a singular voice nikkimoe---
keep singing...
but "mafic" sounds kinda "Rockist" to me...
not quite "Periodotically Correct".........
......but since You are completely covered under the 5th Sediment,
I suppose, yeah --- I dig it : > )
You`ve got a quite a singular voice nikkimoe---
keep singing...
19th Jul 2012 8:58pm
19th Jul 2012 9:01pm
Nikki --- check out my last poem --
I cant believe we put both of these out almost
simultaneously..........
I cant believe we put both of these out almost
simultaneously..........
20th Jul 2012 9:13pm
21st Jul 2012 6:36pm
Nikki,
it`s time to take "
not really an accomplished poet"
OUT of your profile : > )
it`s time to take "
not really an accomplished poet"
OUT of your profile : > )