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Just to Be
If just to be a shadow
cast softly upon your face
to just be a blanket
wrapped warmly in your embrace
to just be a pillow
that holds your silken hair
just to hold your hand
just to be there
to be a memory
that gives you smile
to be the phone
your fingers touch to dial
to be anything
that brings me close to you
to be an unending moment
of life spent with you
cast softly upon your face
to just be a blanket
wrapped warmly in your embrace
to just be a pillow
that holds your silken hair
just to hold your hand
just to be there
to be a memory
that gives you smile
to be the phone
your fingers touch to dial
to be anything
that brings me close to you
to be an unending moment
of life spent with you
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18th Jul 2012 8:17pm
To be or not to be hmm???... I think I'll just be, me....Great piece Soul.
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18th Jul 2012 9:23pm
Re: Just to Be
20th Jul 2012 2:22am
This is sweet and sad. Such a longing.
"to be a memory
that gives you smile"
Dang! I think we all hope to be that to somebody. It's a heartfelt piece Ken. :)
"to be a memory
that gives you smile"
Dang! I think we all hope to be that to somebody. It's a heartfelt piece Ken. :)
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20th Jul 2012 1:41pm
Longing is good when it is sated.
"dang" you say. I wonder, have you maintained your Cali voice or have you picked up some southern drawl? lol
Thank you Rachel.
"dang" you say. I wonder, have you maintained your Cali voice or have you picked up some southern drawl? lol
Thank you Rachel.
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