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悪魔の代弁者 akuma no daibensha
悪魔の代弁者 akuma no daibensha
"beware beware of guest brought here
And on the brink of hell may appear."
Of immoral men, who far excel
All th' inhabitants of hell.
let 'em in let 'em in
for the smell of burning skin.
here they will weep, a sorrow-some groan,
bodies decay and turn to stone.
sacrifices thee by soul,blood and lust.
randomness chant switch and adjust.
riches and happiness they deserve so well,
but they shall feel the hottest flames of hell.
eternal darkness of land that bring.
D.L.N the demons will sing.
"beware beware of guest brought here
And on the brink of hell may appear."
-Kuimiko Yamamoto
means- devils advocate
"beware beware of guest brought here
And on the brink of hell may appear."
Of immoral men, who far excel
All th' inhabitants of hell.
let 'em in let 'em in
for the smell of burning skin.
here they will weep, a sorrow-some groan,
bodies decay and turn to stone.
sacrifices thee by soul,blood and lust.
randomness chant switch and adjust.
riches and happiness they deserve so well,
but they shall feel the hottest flames of hell.
eternal darkness of land that bring.
D.L.N the demons will sing.
"beware beware of guest brought here
And on the brink of hell may appear."
-Kuimiko Yamamoto
means- devils advocate
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Re: 悪魔の代弁者 akuma no daibensh
18th Jul 2012 00:34am
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18th Jul 2012 00:42am
Re: 悪魔の代弁者 akuma no daibensh
18th Jul 2012 00:47am
WOW! this is cool!
"for the smell of burning skin.
here they will weep, a sorrow-some groan,
bodies decay and turn to stone."
I like the detail in your rhyme.
"for the smell of burning skin.
here they will weep, a sorrow-some groan,
bodies decay and turn to stone."
I like the detail in your rhyme.
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18th Jul 2012 00:59am
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18th Jul 2012 00:52am
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18th Jul 2012 1:00am
Re: 悪魔の代弁者 akuma no daibensh
18th Jul 2012 8:55am
Awesome poem! It celebrates well, the darkness of the demons of Makai and the torments of their doomed victims as often depicted in old myths, legends, and folklore. Your poem is that good, to bring all of that to my mind. Excellent work, as always, my friend! Your poetry never fails to amaze me. :)
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18th Jul 2012 11:17pm
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19th Jul 2012 00:05am
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Re: 悪魔の代弁者 akuma no daibensh
21st Aug 2012 10:02pm
You have truly become a pro :) i love it, sounded like the beginning of a great story pulled me right in
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21st Aug 2012 10:04pm
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10th Sep 2012 6:27am
For long I wanted to read some Japanese poetry. It's simply magical and I am carried away to the fantasy each line.
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