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And bad things happen
and thats what makes good things die
so why do u think i always lie
when its the bad things
thats makes those good things die
and i never lie
and those thoughts are just guides
and how can two things that are so unalike
find nothing to rave about or spite
as if all things can coincide
and nothing is good
but still good things die
and as if the whole world could just subside
and the good and bad are the only things we have alike
and thats what makes good things die
so why do u think i always lie
when its the bad things
thats makes those good things die
and i never lie
and those thoughts are just guides
and how can two things that are so unalike
find nothing to rave about or spite
as if all things can coincide
and nothing is good
but still good things die
and as if the whole world could just subside
and the good and bad are the only things we have alike
Published 13th Jul 2012
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13th Jul 2012 6:36am
I very much like this poem. The insanity of the concept of good and bad reside within humanities incapability to realize there is no good or bad; just experience.
It is a philosophical argument without final agreement by all parties.
We are and live and experience. Pain, pleasure, love, hate...the spectrum of our reaction to events that unfold around and within our circle of reality.
Thank you so much for sharing your poem.
Deep...provoking
Phil
It is a philosophical argument without final agreement by all parties.
We are and live and experience. Pain, pleasure, love, hate...the spectrum of our reaction to events that unfold around and within our circle of reality.
Thank you so much for sharing your poem.
Deep...provoking
Phil
13th Jul 2012 10:33am
1st Oct 2012 1:43am
For me this poem just seemed to create a circle, without really saying anything. A bit like the mantra of a moral relativist.
