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Despite it all
Always so willing to give me a piece of your mind
I can only pray there's some remaining for you
pointing out my flaws which you eagerly find
and accusing me of things that I'd never do
Seems no man is the who or what that you want
so shout out their faults exaggerated with hate
by doing so, bitterness is something you flaunt
while denial and insecurities fuck-up your fate
I can only pray there's some remaining for you
pointing out my flaws which you eagerly find
and accusing me of things that I'd never do
Seems no man is the who or what that you want
so shout out their faults exaggerated with hate
by doing so, bitterness is something you flaunt
while denial and insecurities fuck-up your fate
Published 11th Jul 2012
| Edited 27th Oct 2013
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22nd Oct 2013 6:39pm
Wow! What a write! I can feel the bitterness coming through on both sides! This is a great piece of work!
Thanks b... I appreciate the kudos! But really, I was feeling a bit of relief as I wrote this poem. Even though I was presented with plenty of instances to feel bitter about, I never really felt bitterness towards the poem's ode.
