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Blue rooms that breath
the room
is blue
one black door
one empty bed
it haunts me
it wants me
I elude it
for now
but its there
its always there
waiting for me
a room
a blue room
a black door
one empty bed
my bed
made for me
made from dreams
bad dreams
the blue room
the room
made from pain
made to contain
madness
infinite sadness
angst
depression
anger
doubt
they want out
they want me
I feel it
pulling me closer
to the room
wanting me
to unlock it
to turn
the knob
to release them
turn it
whispered
in my brain
my eyes close
perhaps I'm insane
is blue
one black door
one empty bed
it haunts me
it wants me
I elude it
for now
but its there
its always there
waiting for me
a room
a blue room
a black door
one empty bed
my bed
made for me
made from dreams
bad dreams
the blue room
the room
made from pain
made to contain
madness
infinite sadness
angst
depression
anger
doubt
they want out
they want me
I feel it
pulling me closer
to the room
wanting me
to unlock it
to turn
the knob
to release them
turn it
whispered
in my brain
my eyes close
perhaps I'm insane
Published 9th Jul 2012
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9th Jul 2012 2:07am
That is a cool, eerie door!
We sane people, especially Librans, feel insane at times as we see the imbalance and unjust of the world. Just fucked in many ways which lead us to think "it's us".
We sane people, especially Librans, feel insane at times as we see the imbalance and unjust of the world. Just fucked in many ways which lead us to think "it's us".
9th Jul 2012 2:10am
9th Jul 2012 2:26am
Great job with this poem. It had an eerie feel to it. I felt that your format made it more eerie. It's also great to read out loud.
9th Jul 2012 2:34am
9th Jul 2012 2:50am
please --- for ALL of us
Run to Home Depot and buy a dozen padlocks!
sincerely feelin you,
alon
Run to Home Depot and buy a dozen padlocks!
sincerely feelin you,
alon
9th Jul 2012 3:29am
Reminds me of my bedroom as a child. It was painted blue, and I was always horrified to sleep in my own bed (terribly over-active imagination/persistent nightmares). It's nice when you can relate to someone else's work, nice job :]
9th Jul 2012 3:30am
I am going to have a bonfire this October with all my friends about and pull this poem out and read it out loud I'm thinking...:) Thanks for a tingling read my dear..
9th Jul 2012 11:06pm