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Drunken Mess
he awoke
his mouth as dry as a river bed
water,water,water,
head dizzy, fuzzy,
hands a shaking,
cigs and asprin for breakfast
i open a beer and smoke a joint
a shot of whiskey for an eye opener
feeling better a 12 pack later
before i know it
i am caught up in my daily buzz
his mouth as dry as a river bed
water,water,water,
head dizzy, fuzzy,
hands a shaking,
cigs and asprin for breakfast
i open a beer and smoke a joint
a shot of whiskey for an eye opener
feeling better a 12 pack later
before i know it
i am caught up in my daily buzz
Published 1st Jul 2012
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2nd Jul 2012 6:12am
Only critique.. you merge from third person to first person... perhaps make it uniform. Otherwise good work :-)
8th Jul 2012 3:51am
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
2nd Sep 2012 00:06am
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