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silly you, silly me, silly us
okay
i called you 'menstrual'
i know its not the time
of the month but what about
when you call me 'andropausal'
did i tell you the last avatar
i had on facebook was a pic where
i had this constipated look
with that godforsaken word
flashing in bold beneath
of course noone liked it
except may be
nevermind
so i called you 'menstrual'
perhaps a couple of other things
like cruel and i think
that was all
you called me a 'wimp whiner'
with that snort i hate to death
finally i said your cooking
sucked
thud
silence
'oh shit' phenomenon
but that was six hours ago
dont you ever get hungry
when sulking
damn mystery
damn it
[written for the 'cheesy poem' competition]
Published 30th Jun 2012
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30th Jun 2012 1:14am
hahaha, I love it. I have enjoyed "people watching" through the years and this is an entertaining interaction. Cheesy indeed
30th Jun 2012 1:25am
Sir Ken
True that.:) Honestly I definitely envy
someone with your level of exposure. And
I don't have the remotest of doubts when
you say 'people watching'.
Intriguing species, that. Undeniable.
Thank you for stopping by at this unusual
offering from my side. It has been heavy
for a while, you see. A little sun is all.
Warm regards,
Sumeet
True that.:) Honestly I definitely envy
someone with your level of exposure. And
I don't have the remotest of doubts when
you say 'people watching'.
Intriguing species, that. Undeniable.
Thank you for stopping by at this unusual
offering from my side. It has been heavy
for a while, you see. A little sun is all.
Warm regards,
Sumeet
30th Jun 2012 9:25am
Ha! I love this. So real. Ohhhh, if this is true, I'd be careful of what you ate for a while. Being a woman, I'd show you bad cooking alright, oy!
30th Jun 2012 5:22pm
Rachel
Ha!:) Yeah. Be careful all you want.
The human heart is mystery in flesh.
I am sure you are an excellent cook.
Or else, don't worry I can feed a family
of four by cooking myself. [laughter]
thank you for stopping by and the lovely
feedback. Glad to have you around.:)
Sumeet
Ha!:) Yeah. Be careful all you want.
The human heart is mystery in flesh.
I am sure you are an excellent cook.
Or else, don't worry I can feed a family
of four by cooking myself. [laughter]
thank you for stopping by and the lovely
feedback. Glad to have you around.:)
Sumeet
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2019 1:37am
1st Jul 2012 1:35am
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Indie
[BWAhahahahhahAHA!] Dang! I could not help it.
First, no its not true. I am a decent cook myself.
Indian, Israeli, Tandoor, Afgaani, Chinese. Yes.:)
Second, I never dis women. I fall in love and then, that's that. :)
Having said all the unnecessary things, that was very apt. The classic rift. Yes. I have never attempted humour, but trying has not killed one so far. Thank you for stopping by.
Sumeet
p.s- I know that.:D Just one relationship and I had it. [snort]
[BWAhahahahhahAHA!] Dang! I could not help it.
First, no its not true. I am a decent cook myself.
Indian, Israeli, Tandoor, Afgaani, Chinese. Yes.:)
Second, I never dis women. I fall in love and then, that's that. :)
Having said all the unnecessary things, that was very apt. The classic rift. Yes. I have never attempted humour, but trying has not killed one so far. Thank you for stopping by.
Sumeet
p.s- I know that.:D Just one relationship and I had it. [snort]
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Sep 2019 1:37am
1st Jul 2012 1:48am
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1st Jul 2012 1:59am
jaysus, ind. i made a boo boo. :D okay. i will edit all that later. i have too much trouble with these PMs. And yes it has paid off well. [mutters prayers]
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
4th Jul 2012 10:18am
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4th Jul 2012 2:13pm
flowergirl
thank you for stopping by.:] good thing
that you made the connection.please do
have a laugh [i am sure you must have had]
and the pleasure is mine.
smiles,
sumeet
thank you for stopping by.:] good thing
that you made the connection.please do
have a laugh [i am sure you must have had]
and the pleasure is mine.
smiles,
sumeet