Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 11:36am
28th Jun 2012 9:08pm
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28th Jun 2012 10:47pm
Thanks j...been rattling this around a bit too much and with such a heavy hand that I certainly smothered it. Stripped it way back down to initial sentiment refraining from trying to explain it
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Nov 2022 2:35am
28th Jun 2012 10:11pm
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28th Jun 2012 10:55pm
Ha..well my dear pre-version is a most admirable trait when handled with wit...a chuckle, well to me laughter is proof that god can stand us. Thanks for swinging through
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28th Jun 2012 11:03pm
Quick
help me to evacuate
for I fear I may soon feel myself well
open question: the "soon" in third line, is it helpful, not helpful, or inconsequential?...seems silly,but ive genuinely been tripping on wether it should be there or not
help me to evacuate
for I fear I may soon feel myself well
open question: the "soon" in third line, is it helpful, not helpful, or inconsequential?...seems silly,but ive genuinely been tripping on wether it should be there or not
Anonymous
- Edited 21st May 2018 7:36pm
29th Jun 2012 8:30am
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Anonymous
- Edited 18th Nov 2022 2:35am
30th Jun 2012 3:14am
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30th Jun 2012 3:43am
O betty you brilliant rascal you... Not only does that darling step appear,i feel thats a better way to go.. Without the "i fear" its a tad colder,fits...thank ya much
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29th Jun 2012 00:17am
Anonymous
- Edited 12th Dec 2022 4:35pm
8th Jun 2014 2:47am
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