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Your
Your
Your hair. Always with a hat on. Take it off. I want to run my fingers through it
Your eyes. Clear and blue. Stare into my soul. They convey your wants and needs
Your lips. The perfect shape for possessing mine. I want you to kiss me all the time
Your tongue. The right size to commit wonderful acts on me. Use it. Don’t make me beg
Your voice. The sweetest sound I have ever heard. When it is whispering in my ear I find it hard to say no
Your neck. Perfect to sink my teeth into when I am unable to scream your name
Your chest. Broad and manly. I love running my hands over it
Your arms. So strong. Able to move me where you want me. I love the ink on them. Makes me want to trace them with my tongue
Your hands. Perfect fingers. They both know where to touch and how to do it the right way
Your hips. Perfectly in line with mine. They move at just the right speed and hit all the spots that cry out for you
Your legs. Powerful muscles. Beautiful ink. They cover my legs. Holding me down. Making me enjoy the ride
Your
Your hair. Always with a hat on. Take it off. I want to run my fingers through it
Your eyes. Clear and blue. Stare into my soul. They convey your wants and needs
Your lips. The perfect shape for possessing mine. I want you to kiss me all the time
Your tongue. The right size to commit wonderful acts on me. Use it. Don’t make me beg
Your voice. The sweetest sound I have ever heard. When it is whispering in my ear I find it hard to say no
Your neck. Perfect to sink my teeth into when I am unable to scream your name
Your chest. Broad and manly. I love running my hands over it
Your arms. So strong. Able to move me where you want me. I love the ink on them. Makes me want to trace them with my tongue
Your hands. Perfect fingers. They both know where to touch and how to do it the right way
Your hips. Perfectly in line with mine. They move at just the right speed and hit all the spots that cry out for you
Your legs. Powerful muscles. Beautiful ink. They cover my legs. Holding me down. Making me enjoy the ride
Your
Published 26th Jun 2012
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26th Jun 2012 8:50am
you suck cock at writing erotic poetry
your welcome for the constructive critisism
:)
your welcome for the constructive critisism
:)
28th Jun 2012 5:43am
Quite frankly I was not sure of what your comment meant and that is why I messaged you. Thank you for clearing it up for me. And a big big Thank You for the compliment!!!
29th Jun 2012 7:36am
30th Jun 2012 6:34am
11th Jul 2012 9:24pm
Not very poetical and your punctuation leaves much to be desired. Why not write about something you don't know well, like a tree or flowers? Maybe you have poetical gifts but you don't show them here: you show only what you want and like, which are the same thing.
marcella1
marcella1
31st Dec 2013 6:31am
5th Mar 2014 5:17am
Thank you Poetikmind. Love a man in a hat but love running my fingers through his hair more.
27th Mar 2014 8:07pm
