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One More Tear
Behind the door softly weeping
One more scar, one more beating
One more tear, they fall like rain
Deep inside she hides the pain
Not understanding why
she covers up their lies
Unquestioned love
"Why don’t they love me back?"
They try to cover up her wounds
Child of innocence, an angel soon
No more tears
no more sorrow
One more lost
to a brighter tomorrow
One more scar, one more beating
One more tear, they fall like rain
Deep inside she hides the pain
Not understanding why
she covers up their lies
Unquestioned love
"Why don’t they love me back?"
They try to cover up her wounds
Child of innocence, an angel soon
No more tears
no more sorrow
One more lost
to a brighter tomorrow
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
26th Jun 2012 1:11am
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26th Jun 2012 1:48am
It is a brutal reality for many.
Shocking how many girls have been abused in their lives. Most never talk of it.
Thanks, Bro
Shocking how many girls have been abused in their lives. Most never talk of it.
Thanks, Bro
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26th Jun 2012 1:21am
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26th Jun 2012 1:50am
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 7:35pm
26th Jun 2012 2:02am
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26th Jun 2012 2:07am
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26th Jun 2012 4:03am
Wow, this is really good! And I'm not just saying that. This poem actually brought tears to my eyes, and I rarely ever cry. You did an amazing job with the rhyming too! Keep it up! :)
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26th Jun 2012 7:55am
Thank you. I appreciate your comment!
In this "age of enlightenment" is is unacceptable that such wickedness continues.
In this "age of enlightenment" is is unacceptable that such wickedness continues.
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
26th Jun 2012 6:47am
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26th Jun 2012 7:56am
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26th Jun 2012 2:00pm
Hmmm... this one speaks to wounded woman in me and the soul weary tiredness that overwhelms me sometimes.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
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re: Re: One More Tear
26th Jun 2012 2:11pm
Good day Gypsy Red. Thank you and may the weary be replaced with a vitality that courses your souls veins!
Re: One More Tear
27th Jun 2012 5:55am
This was very sad.
I hate the fact that abuse of any kind goes on at all. It breaks my heart.
Great job
I hate the fact that abuse of any kind goes on at all. It breaks my heart.
Great job
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27th Jun 2012 12:34pm
I agree. Abuse of any kind is unacceptable. As a society here, we have desensitized many regarding violence and abuse as the preponderance of venues depicting this wickedness as "cool" abound.
Thank you
Thank you
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
27th Aug 2012 2:48am
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27th Aug 2012 3:11am