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Whispered Secrets ~ for my effervescent friends Strider and Magdalena
the sun whispers secrets to
the clouds
carries them
travels
oceans
lands
pasture
guarding
always guarding
lightning struck
heat raged
no secret was lost
in need
in search
to release
secret mist
to the valley
in this rainfall love is replenished
hearts enjoined with each drop melding the two
words spoken
treasured and guarded with privilege
the clouds
carries them
travels
oceans
lands
pasture
guarding
always guarding
lightning struck
heat raged
no secret was lost
in need
in search
to release
secret mist
to the valley
in this rainfall love is replenished
hearts enjoined with each drop melding the two
words spoken
treasured and guarded with privilege
Published 20th Jun 2012
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
20th Jun 2012 2:08pm
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21st Jun 2012 1:37pm
Was my pleasure Magdalena. You two were my first friends here and what a joy each of you are in your writing and in your spirit. Thank you.
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:05pm
20th Jun 2012 2:58pm
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21st Jun 2012 1:40pm
haha...yeah, I understand guarding some parts of our lives. You are an amazing writer and even more a grrrrreat, encouraging, genuine friend.
Two souls colliding in the heavens and I wish your union to be long and filled to overflowing with the beauty of life and love enjoined!!
Two souls colliding in the heavens and I wish your union to be long and filled to overflowing with the beauty of life and love enjoined!!
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
23rd Aug 2012 6:47pm
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24th Aug 2012 2:30am
I do value their friendship much. My 1st 2 friends here and they are genuine and delightful. Thank you.