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Pitch Black
Lets meet up in the Pitch black,that way we have nothing to distract us but our conversations.Let me woo you with words,feel free to do the same.Fill my head with your thoughts,lets not be afraid to fall deeper in to dialogue,because words create meaning and meaning creates love.Overflow my head with truth's,im tired of hearing lies.I have to trust you in order to lose myself.So lets get lost. _MLK_
Published 14th Jun 2012
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14th Jun 2012 3:15am
very creative. the idea of /and stressing of/ words here "words create meaing and meaning creates love" very nice. but the words bring truth /and trust/ as well contrasted with meeting in the "Pitch black" and getting lost
I think this gives a lot to think about
I think this gives a lot to think about
14th Jun 2012 5:18am
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Anonymous
18th Oct 2012 7:51am
"Overflow my head with truth's,im tired of hearing lies.I have to trust you in order to lose myself.So lets get lost." That was dope!
Very Nice! :-)
Very Nice! :-)
