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Dark Eyes
I remember the black light in your eyes,
the razor of your lips,
leaving me behind,
your body, my blood,
my head, your hands...
Washing my memories
like a fire storm of damaged pleasure (just say a word to kill the pain..... )
I fall everyday, everytime,
anyway. (anyway)
Your voice rising on the wind
the way you made me feel
a world of lost fantasies, drowning
Your love so fine,
the fire starts
Brake my knees and make me crawl
You gave your love to me
but now you take it back,
your body my blood,
my head your hands.
SInking our memories
on a fire storm of damaged pleasure (just say a word to kill the pain.....)
I fall everyday, everytime,
anyway. ( ....anyway).
Your voice rising on the wind
the way you made me feel
a world of lost fantasies, drowning
Your love so fine,
the fire starts
the razor of your lips,
leaving me behind,
your body, my blood,
my head, your hands...
Washing my memories
like a fire storm of damaged pleasure (just say a word to kill the pain..... )
I fall everyday, everytime,
anyway. (anyway)
Your voice rising on the wind
the way you made me feel
a world of lost fantasies, drowning
Your love so fine,
the fire starts
Brake my knees and make me crawl
You gave your love to me
but now you take it back,
your body my blood,
my head your hands.
SInking our memories
on a fire storm of damaged pleasure (just say a word to kill the pain.....)
I fall everyday, everytime,
anyway. ( ....anyway).
Your voice rising on the wind
the way you made me feel
a world of lost fantasies, drowning
Your love so fine,
the fire starts
Published 10th Jun 2012
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Anonymous
10th Jun 2012 9:04am
Love this! :-)
10th Jun 2012 9:08am
Thanx!
I really appreciate the comment, this was the first song that I wrote and actually I liked, so its really nice to "read" that s.o. liked! ;)
I really appreciate the comment, this was the first song that I wrote and actually I liked, so its really nice to "read" that s.o. liked! ;)
10th Jun 2012 1:34pm
10th Jun 2012 2:40pm
Thanx you, ;)
Well, its punk, punk pop. (would be something like "the starting line", -the first band that came into my mind-) ;)
(2 guitars, bass and power drum)
whenever we record it I'll let you know! ;)
Well, its punk, punk pop. (would be something like "the starting line", -the first band that came into my mind-) ;)
(2 guitars, bass and power drum)
whenever we record it I'll let you know! ;)
10th Jun 2012 2:44pm
Anonymous
- Edited 14th Nov 2018 6:35pm
10th Jun 2012 1:49pm
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10th Jun 2012 2:43pm
Thanx, well, actually, you're right, my first language is spanish ;), and that was one of the reason I wanted to post my lyrics.
(p.s. wrote you a pm asking 'bout errors ;) )
(p.s. wrote you a pm asking 'bout errors ;) )