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You walked away..
I was hurt the day I saw you walk away
I was in pain, I was tormenting
Until now I am shut, I am slur..
You created this fear inside
You promised an eternal life
FOREVER, you said it was meant for us,
But what happened to the happy memories
what happened to those caring arms?
what happened to your sweet facade?
what happened to your promises?
what happened to you my baby?
I gave you everything,
luxuries, love and everything you needed
I tried to be the perfect girl for you
I showed you how much I really love you..
You broke me and left me alone
You walked away not minding the glum on my face
You walked away with someone I didn't know
You walked away and left me in tears... You walked away....
Even if you choose to walk away
I chased you like I'm running out of life
The day you spoke and went away
I waited but in few days I saw you with someone else
You asked me to stay,
You asked me to not let you go and I did..
Still I waited, I month, 2 months, 3 months passed
You keep me waiting baby.. How long will I wait?
I was longing for the words you used to say
Memories you shattered like grains
How can I pick up myself now that you are gone?
You left me hanging in a dead people's town..
You never cared about the way I feel
You never cared about everything I did
You never cared about the things we shared
You never cared about the promises you feed.
Now tell me should I care if you come back?
Should I care even if I still love you like hell?
Should I still wait even if you cannot let go of the other one
while asking me and telling me you still love me?
I want to move on and find a better life
I want to chase happiness you forbid
I want to be happy with someone else
But baby please if you cannot stay,
Please, just let me walk away...
I was in pain, I was tormenting
Until now I am shut, I am slur..
You created this fear inside
You promised an eternal life
FOREVER, you said it was meant for us,
But what happened to the happy memories
what happened to those caring arms?
what happened to your sweet facade?
what happened to your promises?
what happened to you my baby?
I gave you everything,
luxuries, love and everything you needed
I tried to be the perfect girl for you
I showed you how much I really love you..
You broke me and left me alone
You walked away not minding the glum on my face
You walked away with someone I didn't know
You walked away and left me in tears... You walked away....
Even if you choose to walk away
I chased you like I'm running out of life
The day you spoke and went away
I waited but in few days I saw you with someone else
You asked me to stay,
You asked me to not let you go and I did..
Still I waited, I month, 2 months, 3 months passed
You keep me waiting baby.. How long will I wait?
I was longing for the words you used to say
Memories you shattered like grains
How can I pick up myself now that you are gone?
You left me hanging in a dead people's town..
You never cared about the way I feel
You never cared about everything I did
You never cared about the things we shared
You never cared about the promises you feed.
Now tell me should I care if you come back?
Should I care even if I still love you like hell?
Should I still wait even if you cannot let go of the other one
while asking me and telling me you still love me?
I want to move on and find a better life
I want to chase happiness you forbid
I want to be happy with someone else
But baby please if you cannot stay,
Please, just let me walk away...
Published 2nd Jun 2012
| Edited 1st Jul 2012
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3rd Jun 2012 9:24am
This was really powerful. It reminded me of a brake up that I had about 4 in a half years ago. Just remember to stay strong and hang in there and things will get better and I'm sure you will find the right one for you.
3rd Jun 2012 6:57pm
thank you am still hanging cause she wants me to :( until now am still hurting.. and she still gives me something to hold on to.. anyway thank you.. :) thank you soomuch emogirlslover :D
3rd Jun 2012 9:06pm
It's really sad :( I had a break up like that once, he lived in the next town over and he just stopped calling then his best friend told me he had another girl and everyone knew.
I was pretty pissed off :D
But you just have to remember that if someone you love or like or whatever has so little respect for you that they'll tell you to wait for them and then leave you, they aren't worth it. I know everyone says that but it's true.
Just keep your self esteem, and remember that no matter how much she (it's a girl, right?) hurt you, you're still a better person most likely.
Or better yet, punch her in the face.
I was pretty pissed off :D
But you just have to remember that if someone you love or like or whatever has so little respect for you that they'll tell you to wait for them and then leave you, they aren't worth it. I know everyone says that but it's true.
Just keep your self esteem, and remember that no matter how much she (it's a girl, right?) hurt you, you're still a better person most likely.
Or better yet, punch her in the face.
4th Jun 2012 2:39am
:(( I hope you are happy now.. but hell yah, it's really hard... It's feels like I am a mistress we keep on hiding, I was the first one.. :(( Now she has her new girl she keeps on telling me she misses me that she wants me , she cannot let go of me. She's telling me she loves the other one but she's longing for me.. She still loves me.. :( anyway, thank you for your warm advices it gives me this feeling of being cared of thank you sublime :D