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Lies
Unknown lies are seen as the truth, lips oozing and festering with poisonous toxin, causing hearts to harden and sink faster than a stone thrown into a river, yet the heart breaks so easily like glass striking the ground bursting into pieces freezing your veins.
Published 2nd Jun 2012
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30th Nov 2012 4:00pm
This poem is filled with harsh truth. Lies are poison, they mislead you and lead to heartbreak and danger.. The message is clear however you might consider formatting it so it flows a little better. Great job!
