I dreamt about a girl

This reminds me of the first time I actually began to realize that I find women attractive as well as men, I had a dream I kissed a girl too xD
I love the poem, I can personally relate to the whole experience in a way.
My only crit would be on the seventh line, maybe you seperate in between "I dreamt about a girl / we sat on a bus". I think it would add a nice break in the poem, since it's kind of a big chunk and it seems like a nice edit.
Otherwise, it's a lovely poem. Thanks for posting it ;)

thank you, :) I did this poem when I was in college, I started having fantasies about a girl I really like.. She's my professor lol.. anyway, thank you for the crit and sharing :D I really appreciate it..  :D Thank you Sublime

It's a great poem! It's sad she's your professor though, haha. But I'm glad to see you used the critique, it looks great! Again, I really like the poem. Great job!

thank you sublime I know the crit is for the best thank you :D niway. I had moved on.. are you lesbian?

makes me imagine my girl now..=) fantastic

loving the site?? hehe thanks for the crit :D