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Love, Abstracted
I could never seem to wash him off me
the naked pieces of me he
soaked
into
what lies beneath
that dare to risk
to exist between hope
& a dream
He cut himself into me
His lines were never
c oo d
r ke
the naked pieces of me he
soaked
into
what lies beneath
that dare to risk
to exist between hope
& a dream
He cut himself into me
His lines were never
c oo d
r ke
Published 2nd Mar 2010
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2nd Mar 2010 2:20pm
Excellent. "dare to risk to exist between hope & a dream" is life in a relationship in a nutshell. Love the graphic way you spell "crooked".
2nd Mar 2010 3:10pm
the words come to life with this fantastic piece of writing!
"dare to risk to exist between hope & a dream" is an amazing portrayal of love and how it causes one to feel.
"dare to risk to exist between hope & a dream" is an amazing portrayal of love and how it causes one to feel.
20th Apr 2010 6:30am
27th Feb 2012 7:29pm
O my word, brilliantly written- i thoroughly enjoyed reading this!!!!!!!!!!!!