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Bullet To The Head
Laying here wondering
Does anybody care
I look into their eyes
But am returned with vacant stares.
I'm tired of this misery
Nobody cares if I'm gone
They treat me like trash
Even though I've done no wrong.
I guess I'm just pathetic
Just another worthless excuse
Maybe I deserve this
And all of their abuse.
I'm ending this
I've finally hit the wall
Sorry you witnessed it
Goodbye to you all.
You can try to reach me
But I won't answer cause I'm dead
I left this world
With a bullet to the head.
Does anybody care
I look into their eyes
But am returned with vacant stares.
I'm tired of this misery
Nobody cares if I'm gone
They treat me like trash
Even though I've done no wrong.
I guess I'm just pathetic
Just another worthless excuse
Maybe I deserve this
And all of their abuse.
I'm ending this
I've finally hit the wall
Sorry you witnessed it
Goodbye to you all.
You can try to reach me
But I won't answer cause I'm dead
I left this world
With a bullet to the head.
Published 29th May 2012
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- Edited 14th May 2018 11:52pm
29th May 2012 3:25am
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17th Jun 2012 2:53am
I like the depth of to this poem and the true emotion, but I think that some of your poems (I've been reading through a lot of them) would sometimes be more effective without a rhyme scheme. I think that it takes away from the poem sometimes when you give it a rhyme scheme, because you have to focus on what rhymes and make it compatible with how you're feeling, which can sometimes be difficult. otherwise, great poem.
