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Long gone
We loved
We laughed
We fucked
I cried
Never did you care
Still I gave everything for a family
A cherry tree in the back yard with a tire swing
a 4 door passenger automobile
car seat in the rear
baby on board
For what
For me to move on
Grown kids now understanding
and you
You stay in the state of fucking delirium
Rocking the jewelry I bought you
Texting me to come to my bed
I'm gone
Long gone
We laughed
We fucked
I cried
Never did you care
Still I gave everything for a family
A cherry tree in the back yard with a tire swing
a 4 door passenger automobile
car seat in the rear
baby on board
For what
For me to move on
Grown kids now understanding
and you
You stay in the state of fucking delirium
Rocking the jewelry I bought you
Texting me to come to my bed
I'm gone
Long gone
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Re: Long gone
23rd May 2012 3:57am
Damn, the things we give for the hope that someone will do the same.
You tell it...I'll stomp my foot for you.
You tell it...I'll stomp my foot for you.
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re: Re: Long gone
23rd May 2012 4:41am
Re: Long gone
23rd May 2012 4:49am
re: Re: Long gone
23rd May 2012 5:29am
Re: Long gone
23rd May 2012 6:50am
We all lose, we all share, we all give withou planing on reciving, especially when we love, god danm it, at the end, we thought we were fucking, but we were the one that got fucked at the end.
good poem.
made me remember.
good poem.
made me remember.
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re: Re: Long gone
23rd May 2012 7:21am
Anonymous
- Edited 15th Apr 2019 9:40pm
23rd May 2012 7:14am
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- Edited 16th May 2018 7:35pm
23rd May 2012 12:12pm
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Re: Long gone
18th Jun 2012 4:53am