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My Bitch
I've got an itch
for a bitch
sick shit, oh
She loves it.
spine against the wall while I shove it,
hands on my chest
mines rest
on yours
just above it..
Now fold...
On your knees !
do as you're told.
Show a bit more !
My girl-
Like a dog on all fours.
Face it down,
bring it up,
arch your back,
raise your butt.
Defining dominatrix-
psychotic beauty
givin' a treat,
showin' tricks,
as I'm pushed against her booty.
She's mine
with a frame so fine.
A true bitch-
My bitch,
making love from behind.
Screaming in ectasy
"oooh, baby"
Mind on blue.
This is my lady.
Tonight,
I own you.
for a bitch
sick shit, oh
She loves it.
spine against the wall while I shove it,
hands on my chest
mines rest
on yours
just above it..
Now fold...
On your knees !
do as you're told.
Show a bit more !
My girl-
Like a dog on all fours.
Face it down,
bring it up,
arch your back,
raise your butt.
Defining dominatrix-
psychotic beauty
givin' a treat,
showin' tricks,
as I'm pushed against her booty.
She's mine
with a frame so fine.
A true bitch-
My bitch,
making love from behind.
Screaming in ectasy
"oooh, baby"
Mind on blue.
This is my lady.
Tonight,
I own you.
Published 15th May 2012
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15th May 2012 7:08am
Very crass.
"psychotic beauty
givin' a treat,
showin' tricks,
as I'm pushed against her booty."
This part especially.
Not too fond of how this poem is pure crass but then again to each his or her own.
"psychotic beauty
givin' a treat,
showin' tricks,
as I'm pushed against her booty."
This part especially.
Not too fond of how this poem is pure crass but then again to each his or her own.
15th May 2012 4:30pm
Well, this is how I wanted it to be, I didn't want anything to be sweet, but whatever, everyones entitled to their opinion.... I do have really good erotics that are very well written. I recommend that you read one of those, (& other pieces as well),
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16th May 2012 7:44am
I never got your answer to that marriage proposal i sent you .. damn girl.. come on over to my place so i can get a taste of that pussy.. i would swallow your entire being.. much love.
18th May 2012 8:38pm
Lol, well of course ill marry u Dev, to have and to hold through all of that beautiful sick shit in your mind,forevaa, haha, thanks ! Glad u liked..
14th Sep 2012 8:49pm
