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No more lucky stars
Slowly i wait
i don't like the look of my fate
years, i don't want to repeat
if only there are times i could delete
growing older and older
as this world gets even colder
iv'e been told ice is a mirror of sadness
frozen within this lonely fright
so i sleep day and night
dreaming of somewhere else like Mars
because on earth there are no more lucky stars
i don't like the look of my fate
years, i don't want to repeat
if only there are times i could delete
growing older and older
as this world gets even colder
iv'e been told ice is a mirror of sadness
frozen within this lonely fright
so i sleep day and night
dreaming of somewhere else like Mars
because on earth there are no more lucky stars
Published 6th May 2012
| Edited 20th May 2012
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20th May 2012 11:46am
Really liked the last two lines - a good ending. The whole poem is an interesting exploration of yourself. Only slight negative is that you've spelled fate wrong in the second line.
20th May 2012 11:56am
