Mae Means

Wow..At first i was visualizing something i only wished to have done then i read the last of it and it totally changed the whole effect.. thats what i love about poetry.. great job. quite the young poet..

Thank you ma'am. :)

"Smiles and laughter and not a whole bunch of depth thereafter." -I've always been fascinated with the way that the little fleeting moments, the throwaway memories, are the ones that somehow seem most important in the long run. I also like the way you break up the first few words, almost easing the reader into it. Excellent work here, simple yet not shallow.

Thank you very much for reading /and/ enjoying it.

Thank you. :)

honest poem.

Incredibly.

Thank you.

This is amazing! It read like a song. It has great lyrical quality. Keep up the good work.

Thank you! :)

This poem is an extremely good write, Carla.
I was captivated.

Thank you very much.

Very welcome.