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i feel invisible
tears in my eyes
my fears alive
dreams where lost
hopes were dry
all alone
breaking of my heart
no longer wanting to be alive
to play my part
my family hadn't a care for me
my friends barley spoke a word to me
I feel left out
not a soul cared that I exist
and was actually there
but as times flew by, memory of me disappears.
I felt invisible and alone
my fears alive
dreams where lost
hopes were dry
all alone
breaking of my heart
no longer wanting to be alive
to play my part
my family hadn't a care for me
my friends barley spoke a word to me
I feel left out
not a soul cared that I exist
and was actually there
but as times flew by, memory of me disappears.
I felt invisible and alone
Published 1st May 2012
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2nd May 2012 4:42am
This is a deep piece I liked it
(Honest critique-you should try keeping the poem in one tense instead of using 'were' you should have used 'are' etc..... )
(Honest critique-you should try keeping the poem in one tense instead of using 'were' you should have used 'are' etc..... )
2nd May 2012 8:29pm
