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Dare
I want you to come to me,
Just so my mind can feed,
I have to come here,
And show you the meaning of fear,
I wish you'd be by my side,
If to you i've lied,
Trust me now my dear,
Help me have my mind clear,
I need you here,
So I can see your eyes,
So I can bring your demise,
I dare you to come to me,
Just so my mind can feed,
I have to come here,
And show you the meaning of fear,
I wish you'd be by my side,
If to you i've lied,
Trust me now my dear,
Help me have my mind clear,
I need you here,
So I can see your eyes,
So I can bring your demise,
I dare you to come to me,
Published 30th Apr 2012
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30th Apr 2012 2:12am
30th Apr 2012 3:27am
i love the way you played around with your words
especially the way you use fear to captivate, and i like how you rhym so perfectly.
not alot of people have that handy. good work
especially the way you use fear to captivate, and i like how you rhym so perfectly.
not alot of people have that handy. good work
30th Jun 2013 4:46pm
that many commas makes this a run-on sentence not a poem! All cap's, really?? tempo is chopp-ie @ best, whilst (and) should never start a sentence nor be capitalized! poetry is free=will but even freedom has it's rules... keep grindin
