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I feel weak
i feel weak as i sit here
i feel weak as i break my own skin
i feel weak as my blade turn red
i feel weak as my mind bends and breaks
i feel weak as memories of bad times cloud my thoughts
i feel weak as i lie in the hospital room
i feel weak as darkness comes slowly for me
i feel weak as i go pale and bleed out
but i feel strong, as i leave my body behind.
i feel weak as i break my own skin
i feel weak as my blade turn red
i feel weak as my mind bends and breaks
i feel weak as memories of bad times cloud my thoughts
i feel weak as i lie in the hospital room
i feel weak as darkness comes slowly for me
i feel weak as i go pale and bleed out
but i feel strong, as i leave my body behind.
Published 20th Apr 2012
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21st Apr 2012 3:44am
this is fucking amazing...and its almost like exactly how I feel when....'that' happens.
Really good job.
Really good job.
23rd Apr 2012 3:28am
That ending line makes it!!!!!!!!!! Great poem, gets it across perfectly!!!!!!!!!!!
