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When you.... It makes me....
When you yell at me
It makes me cry
When you say fucked up comments to me
It makes me cut
When you beat me
It makes me drink
When you say you could care less
It makes me take pills
When you call me stupid
It makes me wish I was dead
Do you see the pattern here???
It's all your fault!!!!
You ruined everything!!!!
I looked up to you
And it made me realize
Your just as fucked up as me
I hope when I'm dead
You feel guilt
And you'll never forget
When I finally die
It will be all your fault
Dont worry!!!
I'll see you again
You'll be right there with me
Burning in hell for eternity
It makes me cry
When you say fucked up comments to me
It makes me cut
When you beat me
It makes me drink
When you say you could care less
It makes me take pills
When you call me stupid
It makes me wish I was dead
Do you see the pattern here???
It's all your fault!!!!
You ruined everything!!!!
I looked up to you
And it made me realize
Your just as fucked up as me
I hope when I'm dead
You feel guilt
And you'll never forget
When I finally die
It will be all your fault
Dont worry!!!
I'll see you again
You'll be right there with me
Burning in hell for eternity
Published 19th Apr 2012
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19th Apr 2012 5:00am
Very dark... It made me feel sad... But I guess that was your point... That and to make him/her feel gilt... I think you did a good job.... O ya hope you feel better :)
19th Apr 2012 5:03am
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19th Apr 2012 3:26pm
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22nd Apr 2012 9:05pm
its really good. blunt is a really good thing, and its a good think. maybe the title should be cause and effect tho. :)
17th May 2012 2:58am
thats is a really dark poem but i know why you said what you have said and that is what dives it all the meening.
23rd Jul 2012 9:08pm
It was a dark, dark poem but at the same time I couldn't help but smile at this one because I can remember feeling this same exact way many many times. Your writing is great in it's own way to me, although everyone has their own reason why they like something I just know that it's all too familiar to me dear....
Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for sharing.
