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Biting The Rope
I know she was stepping out
Things weren’t working out
Shit got difficult
But never got physical
She was everything
i felt like i was anything
my sex was real
But she was always
Faking. noted.
There she went
I told her that I loved her
But she bowed her head,
We promised forever love
But damn I wish I was dead,
I can’t explain how many
Times I cried and hide,
Family kept aside,
With myself I kept a
Fight. I can’t explain it
No more to be said,
And everything i've done for you .
And then I wonder
Did she ever really feel
Something,
I’ve been looking in my brain
But shrink to an empty space
Knowing drinks might delay
The inevitability of facing the true
Witch remains a word,
All confusion wants to push away,
Adding more just to be clear,
Things that I conveniently
Did not want to mention,
Honesty, never felt that
Sensation,
Preferring instead
To pin all hopes,
I felt like a slave,
but now I’m biting, breaking
This fucking rope.
SENA
Things weren’t working out
Shit got difficult
But never got physical
She was everything
i felt like i was anything
my sex was real
But she was always
Faking. noted.
There she went
I told her that I loved her
But she bowed her head,
We promised forever love
But damn I wish I was dead,
I can’t explain how many
Times I cried and hide,
Family kept aside,
With myself I kept a
Fight. I can’t explain it
No more to be said,
And everything i've done for you .
And then I wonder
Did she ever really feel
Something,
I’ve been looking in my brain
But shrink to an empty space
Knowing drinks might delay
The inevitability of facing the true
Witch remains a word,
All confusion wants to push away,
Adding more just to be clear,
Things that I conveniently
Did not want to mention,
Honesty, never felt that
Sensation,
Preferring instead
To pin all hopes,
I felt like a slave,
but now I’m biting, breaking
This fucking rope.
SENA
Published 18th Apr 2012
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19th Apr 2012 00:21am
You had occasional grammar errors in there but otherwise it was a great poem, I'm in a similiar situation, but there isn't any sex involved, and when I said "I love you" she insisted I didn't... Great Poem again
19th Apr 2012 1:12am
Thanx. I know how u feel. It was somthing i wrote while ago. Km glad u liked it. Sena
