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Tell Me
Whispers in ear
Breath so warm
Kisses so tender and juicy
Look in eachothers eyes knowing its time
Tingle
Quaking
Quivering
Trimbling
Baby the things you do to me
Waiting
Scared
Falling
Knowing
This is how I'm feeling
Thinking
Wondering
Dreaming
What is it on your mind please tell me
Breath so warm
Kisses so tender and juicy
Look in eachothers eyes knowing its time
Tingle
Quaking
Quivering
Trimbling
Baby the things you do to me
Waiting
Scared
Falling
Knowing
This is how I'm feeling
Thinking
Wondering
Dreaming
What is it on your mind please tell me
Published 13th Apr 2012
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14th Apr 2012 4:46am
This reads very much like a note to someone who hasn't just captured the body but also the mind as well. Smooth flow here.
13th Jun 2012 4:39am
I like this, a lot. good read. oh and it would be "trembling" just a spelling error :)
