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Script should
Script should
heal
or inflict
sickness
create
and summon
its own gods
be held with gloves
so the hand that holds
tomorrows truth
does not pollute
the Aethyr
heal
or inflict
sickness
create
and summon
its own gods
be held with gloves
so the hand that holds
tomorrows truth
does not pollute
the Aethyr
Published 9th Apr 2012
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 11:36am
9th Apr 2012 8:08pm
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10th Apr 2012 6:41pm
thanks j- I am not in love with the "Aethyr" at the end...I want its concept- but not necessarily the cliche of its sound
Anonymous
- Edited 17th May 2018 7:36pm
11th Apr 2012 5:00am
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11th Apr 2012 5:40am
hmmm... the liquid correlation could work out well, appreciate the idea. I've been wrestling with the word "ayre" which i think has a similiar connotation as "Aethyr", and I like the look/sound of it- but Im not very familiar with the term and feel funny about words I dont know on a first name basis...think im gonna paddle down the stream of your suggestion see what happens