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Broken Heart
You can not see the bruises
Glue can't fix the cracks
No medicine will ease the ache
Or gain the feeling back
You know that it is beating
Though you felt it fall apart
Now you must keep praying
Time will mend your broken heart
Glue can't fix the cracks
No medicine will ease the ache
Or gain the feeling back
You know that it is beating
Though you felt it fall apart
Now you must keep praying
Time will mend your broken heart
Published 7th Apr 2012
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7th Apr 2012 10:30pm
admirably written; short, sweet, and simple. It had a good message, and I wish I could write praise that didn't sound so cliche.
7th Apr 2012 10:31pm
12th Apr 2012 5:20am
I like it but I think you should have wrote more to express how a broken heart feels more. Idk . I like the first part the best .
12th Apr 2012 5:27am
thank you, i didn't want it to be in depth, it was just sweet and simple. but i appreciate the advice
12th May 2012 7:15pm
