Lost girl

She is a girl  
Who is lost in this world  
She thought she knew how it worked  
But that was a long time ago  
 
Now she's so deeply confused  
She doesn't know what's right  
And she feels she did everything wrong  
 
She still feels the old cuts  
when her blood mixed with tears  
She remembers those lost years  
 
There were so many things left undone  
And so many songs left unsung  
Her mind is so warped and twisted  
 
She tries to take pills  
She takes razor blades, score deep into skin  
But nothing ever seems to help  
 
She has lost everything  
Her life has just fallen apart  
Shes lost her soul  
And even her heart  
    
Her world just turns cold  
And nobody is around  
This is the one day that all is lost and was never found  
 
 
hey, your poem was very good, and i liked it, but i tweaked a few things in the poem above, see what you think, let me know. :)

Reads like a much more intense version of No Doubt's "I'm Just A Girl"!

Not sure what u mean

The song mentions some of the same things you do in the poem.

This was like a recap of my life. You wrote this in better words than i could ever imagine.

Thanks so much

my friend recommended to read some of your poems.. amazing. just amazing

Thank u so much :)

wow, truly amazing :) keep it upm you have talent!

Thank u it means a lot when people like my work