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Still Love Me?
You stroll over,
See my mascara tears
And say "I love you"
With a smile
Trying to make me better
You love me
Really?
Do you?
I'm failing math
My room's a mess
I'm broke as fuck
I haven't had sleep
I can't pay attention
Still love me?
I cry at night
I hate the sun
I am depressed
I play WoW
I have no friends
Still love me?
I hate the world
I break hearts
I destroy friends
I'm merciless towards enemies
I kill people in my dreams
Still love me?
I cut too deep
I curse and I scream
I worship Satan
I laugh at people's agony
I'm the devil
Still love me?
You're the first on my list to die.
See my mascara tears
And say "I love you"
With a smile
Trying to make me better
You love me
Really?
Do you?
I'm failing math
My room's a mess
I'm broke as fuck
I haven't had sleep
I can't pay attention
Still love me?
I cry at night
I hate the sun
I am depressed
I play WoW
I have no friends
Still love me?
I hate the world
I break hearts
I destroy friends
I'm merciless towards enemies
I kill people in my dreams
Still love me?
I cut too deep
I curse and I scream
I worship Satan
I laugh at people's agony
I'm the devil
Still love me?
You're the first on my list to die.
Published 30th Mar 2012
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3rd Apr 2012 5:24am
It reads a bit like a Doctor Seuss set of "if"; setting up all the conditions for asking if the person still loves the subject. The ending confuses me a bit. The conditions for love written earlier don't all represent things associated with the devil. Some do but not all. I am not even going to try to figure out why the devil is in a hurry to add someone to her/his domain, rather then waiting as usual for a person's death.
9th Apr 2012 6:46pm