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.:Eye Got The Blank Stare:.

 
 
 
kid -
napped

slept right through the whole bit; a lullaby
giving me less than a grand goodbye

this gift;  the last rift

a non - comforting display of artful erosion
empty words by me they were taken
when received?
they felt…not to be  mistaken

she’s now caught (up) short and very red handed
eyes were upset - so my eyes
they demanded

yet all my eyes received was that blank stare
micro-bits of hard wrung tears  

enjoined by a bitter task;
the unmasking of her unseen affairs
adding to my subsequent stare
wherein my single tear added more  
a solemn, not silent retort about a whore

she now pulled out of place; then replaced by pressure
feeble her efforts by any measure - she
made to feel like
she was my departing treasure  

fractured & stolen…theft covered (up) by a dutiful smile
an unexpected - trial
style empty of any genuine feeling
ears could hear in her voice - all
all - that she wasn’t revealing

nothing to parrot or graph
nothing to say - just a blank  

words worth - not mentioning
nothing describing a picture of well being  
my ears now
that are here now
weren’t hearing what she’d been saying - without words

now her smile curves

and eye believe to whomever it now serves
leaving me

deaf -  dumb  -  blind
Written by kriticool
Published | Edited 5th Apr 2013
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